HUNTING POEM
well ever since I was twelve
I have loved the sport of hunting
dad and I would go with our guns
and try to get some animals a-jumpin
we left the house at around three
before the sun had even woke
we walked for hours throgh the brush
and neither one of us spoke.
The sun began to break through the trees
and the thaw began to melt through the frost
the birds had started chirping
and the feeling of early morning drowsiness was lost.
My spirits began to warm
and the excitement of the hunt had set in
the nerves were now jumpy
and my eyes scoured the area again and again
It seemed like it had been hours
how long had I been waiting?
I felt compelled to look at my watch
I could feel the prime time fading.
Just then I hear the noise
hopefully a beast lurking nearby
my eyes devour the landscape
but all I see is a bird flying by
It really has been hours now
I feel my conciousness wanting to sleep
the birds chirping, the bees buzzing
I keeping jerking awake,but try to be discreet
Finally! I hear the noise I have wanted
bushes are shaking just at the end of the clearing
I raise my gun to point at the culprit
but my patience is definitely not endearing.
I loose my cool! I get buck fever
firing into the bush without a second thought
the movement stops immediately
as if I hit it directly;there was no fight to be fought
I get out of my stand
run with all of my body I can demand
I get over to the bush
start to look in and see a hand.
Because I killed this being with a name
panic hits me like a fucking train.
what was I to do? Where was I to go?
I am definitely headed to hell below.
Fuck it I say- just look again
while pulling back the branches of the death bush
I feel the crreep up my spine
as I look upon the spectacle of my fathers head crushed.
The sickness sets in; I get dizzy
I will never be able to live with what I have done
my mother, my sister, brother!
How will they feel when their blood runs.
There is nothing left to do
my fate is sealed in the stupidity of my impulsive deeds
I place my teeth on the cold steel barrel
as I slowly pull the trigger and dream of egyptian reeds.
THE END
Thursday, August 16, 2007
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2 comments:
very nice. i'm going to not do the impulsive thing an do a psychological analysis here...that's probably best.
i love the way you changed the rhyme scheme and meter, but so slightly, to heighten the intensity of emotion.
rm
thanks man, no-one ever notices that part of the poem- the meter. As far as the psychological analysis goes.......it isnt so much about MY dad but about a story i saw on the news about some guy gettin shot while hunting. I tried to think of a way to make it more personal, and a little more powerful. I figured it would be a better tale with some family on family action.
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